Re: [PD] newbie: Feedback and questions

1 Dec 2006

      What kind of question is that?  You think you can just come here and

be all friendly and expect a response?!?
;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)   ;-)
Ok, hope the tone came across right there...  Sounds like a

interesting use of Pd, I always like to hear about things being

stretched a bit here and there.
.hc
On Nov 30, 2006, at 8:44 AM, David F. Place wrote:
...
Hello PD Virtuosi:
Imagine my delight when I first enrolled in the PD list a few days

ago to find that you've all resolved to give up grumpiness so as

not to put off newbies like me!  It gave me courage to put forward

my first effort for criticism and feedback.
The patch implements a tone generator for Pythagorean tuning with

syntonic comma offsets.  I hope it will help my renaissance flute

consort to learn to play in just intonation in the style of

Zarlino.  So, it has to be usable by non-electronic music

people.    It does what I want.  I would appreciate if anyone could

review it for style and understanding.  I suspect that I have done

some unnecessary things do to my imperfect understanding
One thing in particular that it does in a way I don't like is

setting the note name.  I would prefer to pass the note name as an

argument to the noteSelector abstraction instead of having that bit

of [set( and [send] circuitry off to the side of the noteSelector,

but I couldn't figure out how.
Thanks in advance for your attention.
Cheers, David
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