I&#39;ve made an update to the text. Deleted repetitions (eg.: multiplatform), the &quot;ideal tool&quot; expression (let&#39;s keep it cool :o) and moved the remark about learning back to the end. I&#39;m happy with the other changes that have been made, so when you guys feel the same, we may want to move towards publishing.<br>

<br>András<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sat, Dec 1, 2012 at 1:06 PM, Marco Donnarumma <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:devel@thesaddj.com" target="_blank">devel@thesaddj.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">

looks good thanks!<div class="im HOEnZb"><br><br><br clear="all">--<br>Marco Donnarumma<br>New Media + Sonic Arts Practitioner, Performer, Teacher, Director.<br>Embodied Audio-Visual Interaction Research Team.<br>Department of Computing, Goldsmiths University of London<br>



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<br><br></div><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5"><div class="gmail_quote">On Sat, Dec 1, 2012 at 2:50 AM, Hans-Christoph Steiner <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:hans@at.or.at" target="_blank">hans@at.or.at</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>

<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">

<div style="word-wrap:break-word"><div><br></div><div>This is looking much better, here&#39;s my quick edit:</div><div><br></div><div><div><span><b>Pure Data</b></span><span> (aka Pd) is an open source visual programming language. Pd enables musicians, visual artists, performers, researchers</span><span>,</span><span> and  developers to graphically create software</span><span>. It is an ideal tool for those who wish to learn how to process data from a varied range of media without writing lines and lines of text. Pd is used to</span><span> process </span><span>and</span><span> generat</span><span>e</span><span> sound, video</span><span>,</span><span> 2D/3D graphics,</span><span> sensor data</span><span>, input devices,</span><span> </span><span>MIDI and more</span><span>. Pd can easily work over local and remote</span><span> networks</span><span> so to</span><span> </span><span>integrate wearable technology,</span><span> motor</span><span> systems</span><span>, lighting </span><span>rigs, </span><span>and other equipment</span><span>. Pd is fully cross-platform, it is used to realize interactive artworks on desktop and mobile, as well as to handle complex networked systems for large-scale projects.</span></div>



</div><span><font color="#888888"><div><div><span><br></span></div></div><div><span><br></span></div><div><span>.hc</span></div></font></span><div><div><br><div><div>On Nov 30, 2012, at 5:24 AM, Marco Donnarumma wrote:</div>



<br><blockquote type="cite">cool, thanks Nicolas.<br>I just reworded and added a few keywords here and there. You can see it on the pad, meanwhile, what about it:<br><br><div><span><b>Pure Data</b></span><span> (aka Pd) is an open source visual programming language. Pd enables musicians, visual artists, performers, researchers</span><span>,</span><span> and  developers to graphically create software</span><span>.
 It is an ideal tool for those who wish to learn how to process data 
from a varied range of media without writing strings of code. Pd 
software is used to</span><span> process </span><span>and</span><span> generat</span><span>e</span><span>  sound, video</span><span>,</span><span> 2D/3D graphics,</span><span> and</span><span> interfac</span><span>e</span><span> sensors, input devices,  </span><span>and </span><span>MIDI</span><span>. Pd can easily work over locale and remote</span><span> networks</span><span> so to</span><span> </span><span>integrate wearable technology,</span><span> motor</span><span> systems</span><span>, lighting </span><span>rigs, </span><span>and other equipment</span><span>.
 Pd is fully cross-platform, it is used to realise interactive artworks 
on laptop and smartphones, as well as to handle complex networked 
systems for large-scale projects.</span></div><div><br>cheers,<br></div><br clear="all">--<br>Marco Donnarumma<br>New Media + Sonic Arts Practitioner, Performer, Teacher, Director.<br>

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<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Nov 29, 2012 at 5:04 PM, Nicolas Montgermont <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:nicolas_montgermont@yahoo.fr" target="_blank">nicolas_montgermont@yahoo.fr</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>





<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div><div style="font-size:10pt;font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif">Sorry for the french interface,<br>I thought it was localized...<br>





I&#39;ve moved everything on an english piratepad:<br><a href="http://piratepad.net/pPEAhgQS00" target="_blank">http://piratepad.net/pPEAhgQS00</a><br><br>so let&#39;s forget about framapad and use this one instead.<br><br>





best,<br>n<br><br><div><span><br></span></div><div><br></div>  <div style="font-family:arial,helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:10pt"> <div style="font-family:times new roman,new york,times,serif;font-size:12pt"> <div dir="ltr">





 <font face="Arial"> <hr size="1">  <b><span style="font-weight:bold">De :</span></b> András Murányi &lt;<a href="mailto:muranyia@gmail.com" target="_blank">muranyia@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br> <b><span style="font-weight:bold">À :</span></b> <a href="mailto:pdweb@iem.at" target="_blank">pdweb@iem.at</a> <br>





 <b><span style="font-weight:bold">Envoyé le :</span></b> Jeudi 29 novembre 2012 14h47<br> <b><span style="font-weight:bold">Objet :</span></b> Re: [Pdweb] front
 page text (was: rename &quot;download Pd&quot; to &quot;Downloads&quot;)<br> </font> </div><div><div> <br><div><div>On Thu, Nov 29, 2012 at 12:02 PM, Marco Donnarumma <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a rel="nofollow" href="mailto:devel@thesaddj.com" target="_blank">devel@thesaddj.com</a>&gt;</span> wrote:<br>





<blockquote style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">

hey folks, where can i add my edits?<div><br>
</div></blockquote></div><br>Just go to <a rel="nofollow" href="http://lite.framapad.org/p/HtIWJQZv7m" target="_blank">http://lite.framapad.org/p/HtIWJQZv7m</a> and edit away...<br>You can set your nick clicking on the avatar (top right corner).<br>





It will automatically set a unique color for you, and the clock icon lets you see previous revisions. (BTW what does the star icon do?)<br>

<br>András<br>
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