I've made an update to the text. Deleted repetitions (eg.: multiplatform), the "ideal tool" expression (let's keep it cool :o) and moved the remark about learning back to the end. I'm happy with the other changes that have been made, so when you guys feel the same, we may want to move towards publishing.

András

On Sat, Dec 1, 2012 at 1:06 PM, Marco Donnarumma <devel@thesaddj.com> wrote:

looks good thanks!

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On Sat, Dec 1, 2012 at 2:50 AM, Hans-Christoph Steiner <hans@at.or.at> wrote:

This is looking much better, here's my quick edit:

Pure Data (aka Pd) is an open source visual programming language. Pd enables musicians, visual artists, performers, researchers, and  developers to graphically create software. It is an ideal tool for those who wish to learn how to process data from a varied range of media without writing lines and lines of text. Pd is used to process and generate sound, video, 2D/3D graphics, sensor data, input devices, MIDI and more. Pd can easily work over local and remote networks so to integrate wearable technology, motor systems, lighting rigs, and other equipment. Pd is fully cross-platform, it is used to realize interactive artworks on desktop and mobile, as well as to handle complex networked systems for large-scale projects.

.hc

On Nov 30, 2012, at 5:24 AM, Marco Donnarumma wrote:

cool, thanks Nicolas.
I just reworded and added a few keywords here and there. You can see it on the pad, meanwhile, what about it:

Pure Data (aka Pd) is an open source visual programming language. Pd enables musicians, visual artists, performers, researchers, and  developers to graphically create software. It is an ideal tool for those who wish to learn how to process data from a varied range of media without writing strings of code. Pd software is used to process and generate  sound, video, 2D/3D graphics, and interface sensors, input devices,  and MIDI. Pd can easily work over locale and remote networks so to integrate wearable technology, motor systems, lighting rigs, and other equipment. Pd is fully cross-platform, it is used to realise interactive artworks on laptop and smartphones, as well as to handle complex networked systems for large-scale projects.

cheers,

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On Thu, Nov 29, 2012 at 5:04 PM, Nicolas Montgermont <nicolas_montgermont@yahoo.fr> wrote:

Sorry for the french interface,
I thought it was localized...
I've moved everything on an english piratepad:
http://piratepad.net/pPEAhgQS00

so let's forget about framapad and use this one instead.

best,
n

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Envoyé le : Jeudi 29 novembre 2012 14h47
Objet : Re: [Pdweb] front page text (was: rename "download Pd" to "Downloads")

On Thu, Nov 29, 2012 at 12:02 PM, Marco Donnarumma <devel@thesaddj.com> wrote:

hey folks, where can i add my edits?

Just go to http://lite.framapad.org/p/HtIWJQZv7m and edit away...
You can set your nick clicking on the avatar (top right corner).
It will automatically set a unique color for you, and the clock icon lets you see previous revisions. (BTW what does the star icon do?)

András

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