Hi Brian,
I'm on OSX now and just copied both text files to Textedit where I saved them with UTF-8 encoding. I was able to open both with Pd-0.43-0 and Pd-0.42-5 (except for the objects of libraries I haven't loaded).
Other than the coordinates and order of objects, the only difference I see is on the line with “wave sinesum.” His version has “\;” after the coordinates, and my version has “:” after the coordinates. I tried changing that in his version, but still couldn’t get it to open.